A poem.....sux but very imaginative.

Little piece of crap I managed somehow. Brickbats (a.k.a comments) most welcome.

My poems shall never have a structure. Throughout this you may find the theme drifting while the scheme maintained. I've tried to separate the drifting themes though it may not be completely necessary. I know that sux, but then I'm not a pro ! I am sticking to the rhyming scheme tho i usually don't follow any rhyming scheme in my poems.

I call it "A little bit of hope"

Things I ask for
may never be given.
if I keep asking
will I be forgiven ?

Stars I try to reach
are just too far.
if I try to fly
will I reach my star ?

The path I'm taking
may not have a bend.
if I keep walking
will my journey end ?

The light I see
may not be mine.
if I stare longer
will, for me, it shine ?

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The times I lost
may just be fate.
if I challenge it
will it be worth the wait ?

The clues I mistook
are still there.
if I read them again
will anyone, then care ?

The memories I cherish
shall vanish too fast.
if I keep holding on
will they, then last ?

The dreams I see
were always untrue.
if I kept my eyes closed
will they be called true ?

-me

PS. Don't draw any conclusions abt my psyche this's something I've always believed in.

Current Song Mood: Seal - Kiss from a Rose

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